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Billie started discussion Building by Chapter Title

Hi guys, so I've just finished my first chapter (ever) and I need some feedback, I want it harsh and truthful so I can improve. I've also already got some names in mind , that's why they are left blank in the first chapter because I couldn't think of any then,  but if you have any suggestions that would also be great. Thank you!!

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