Tyra Kirkpatrick started discussion First chapter (need opinion)
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I think it would be a good idea to have a thread solely for suggestions.

Ill start it off, I guess. I think it would be a good idea to be able to change the color of the text.

In other writing applications, I usually use orange to make small embedded notes, and gray to mark potential changes to words I don't like. (like a less intrusive strikethrough)

I made a quick mock-up in photoshop to better demonstrate.

(just ignore my garbage first draft)